Comments on: Matthew Levine andRobert Haydon Jones

By: paul zalon

paul zalon — Mon, 13 Feb 2017 23:31:37 +0000

Great Knife Mathew!

Jones is a lean mean writing machine- he sucks you in with elegant simplicity and hyper realism.I could picture the store location and the alley with total clarity; that is not easy to do.
Never saw that ending coming, but it made sense; alcohol and drugs kill, guns kill, words live.

By: Larry R.

Larry R. — Mon, 25 Jan 2016 18:31:31 +0000

Pow. I’m dead. Brutal.

By: Chuck

Chuck — Fri, 30 Jan 2015 22:45:13 +0000

This is a piece that I’d like to see longer with more character development. The plot is very engaging and kept me reading and the each of the characters, even the teen girls, are easy to connect with.

By: Greg Lippert

Greg Lippert — Thu, 15 Jan 2015 19:27:45 +0000

Surprise! Didn’t see that coming. Guess you have to always watch your back (or chest).

By: Chris Egan

Chris Egan — Fri, 09 Jan 2015 21:23:50 +0000

Well played! I knew there’d be a turn in the road, but not this one, leading to our hero’s dead-end!

By: Sean Beaudoin

Sean Beaudoin — Wed, 07 Jan 2015 20:28:06 +0000

Vintage Jones, no doubt.

By: Dave Monroe

Dave Monroe — Mon, 22 Dec 2014 17:38:28 +0000

Wild twist of ending. Right from the beginning our expectations about who is dangerous and violent are toyed with. Then the ending flips it all on it’s head. Those who are seemingly least violent can be the most lethal. Riveting, chilling. Great artwork, too.

By: Charles DeFanti

Charles DeFanti — Mon, 22 Dec 2014 01:44:55 +0000

Two-fisted fiction, as usual, though perhaps more realistic than we know. A mutual friend bears the name Chris, and might have supplied much of the raw material.

By: Ed Lambertson

Ed Lambertson — Fri, 19 Dec 2014 15:01:08 +0000

A few twists and a few turns and a WOW ending. Gives credibility to the old phrase “No good deed goes unpunished”

By: daniel shulman

daniel shulman — Fri, 19 Dec 2014 14:18:16 +0000

Wow! Never does a good deed go unpunished. It grips you all the way through and then hits you with a spectacular payoff. This is terrific work by a fine writer.