Inspiration piece:
Hands
Hands,
worn and scarred
gracing strings
with fingers curling, stretching.
Painting melodies with tongue and teeth.
Lashes close
forehead tips
The worry-worn soul bows its head
and praise flows forth.
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Response piece:
4 Comments
wonderful Margaret and Alisa, the first thing that drew my eye in the painting were her fingers! Love them both. x
How funny – Angel saw a woman and I saw a man (in both pieces). This was a match made in heaven – it would be difficult, if we hadn’t been told, to work out which of these two wonderful pieces was the inspiration and which the response. Thank you both!
What’s interesting, Val, is that I first thought of a man; then, with all the memories/ideas the poem evoked, a woman. As I told Alisa, one of the memories her poem brought to mind was of a gospel singer we saw in the Bahamas, at a concert she had been coaxed from retirement to perform at. She had such grace, power and dignity that she has stayed in my mind ever since, and it was her qualities I was thinking of.
Wow, this is so powerful!